- Stronger openeing - possibly front facing lip syncing
- "knock on door" - physically knock on door
- 0.52 - "coming around" - text message - charlie waiting/texting him
- 1.11 - replace shot
- Face to camera with white background - add sunflowers - cross platform branding
- 1.41 - replace shot
- Include more dancing shots
- intricate below the knees shots
- Crop the dancing shots - why are the rail lines in the back - distracting
- 2.10 - repeated shot
- Add flowers
- More dancing shots
- More use of the ip syncing
- Could add animated lines around dancing shots or wall shots
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